lucas spengals thread of sprites!

[~GodricGryffindor9~]

well to start off ive been doing sprites for a very long time but then stopped. these are the first sprites in a year and a half. i can do splices,recolors,revamps,reposes and evry now and then a custom sprite(but dont count on it).

SPLICES:




PALLETTE SWAP.


oh yes i used to work in a sprite shop so i got used to people telling me what they want. meaning its harder for me to get ideas for sprites.
so if you want a sprite done please PM me.

ps:plz PM me if i just so happen to be breaking a rule.(i looked at the rules 4 times)

 

[InMooseWeTrust]

While I don't have a problem with the colors themselves, they are very badly used. Try sticking with the reds, yellows, and oranges. The head also looks disproportionately huge so maybe you should shrink it (or grow the body).

This one looks really nice. however, upon closer inspection the Shedinja wings look forced. You should also fix the outline on the wings because it doesn't match the rest of the body.

This one made me laugh. It's good for a joke, but it should never be used for anything except decorations on avatars and such.

Either make the head match the limbs or vice versa. The eyes shouldn't be that color, and the inside of the mouth is too red.

 

[~GodricGryffindor9~]

emm well the stripes were custom and the face didnt look good in that light yellow color.

and on sheditot
if i didnt push the wings in it would look like they diddnt attatch to the body


thanks for the advice.

 

[Broken.Promise.]

- As I've mentioned before, the ear's a bit dodgy. Otherwise, pretty good job :)

- Simple, yet effective. I would have liked to have seen it in Shedinja's colour palette though, as it has hardly been used in the splice, except for the halo thing and the wings.

- Hehe, I like this one, most of it's really well done. One problem however. on the head, the lines are still a dark grey, it would look a lot better as a darker red.

- As mentioned before, the head and the arms need to match, it looks very odd. If they matched, then you'd have a pretty good recolour. As you said, the head didn't look right in the yellow colour. You could have made the arms grey though..

But not too bad :)

 

[~GodricGryffindor9~]

UPDATE!

this one is bigger so here we go.




Bastia,
the pieces on this one fit nicely and i really enjoyed coloring it.




Pachile,
i dont have any complaints on this one but i dont like it as well as Bastia.



Shuppetite and Banecham.

i think i could have done better on Banecham...



hmm well i think i had a bit of a problem with the yellow shading on cressilia.



i really like this one.


please comment and constuctive critisize.

 

[<~F.M.P~>]

Ha ha not bad the onix reminds me of skittles. that ones my favorite so far

 

[zacnoa345]

Nice sprites and I like the onyx the best (hes beast)!!!1

 

[~GodricGryffindor9~]

cool. i have alot of time to make sprites since im not allowed to post sprites sooner than 24 hours of my last sprite post. wich was at 7:54.

so youll see a bunch of sprites.(and maybe a custom if your lucky. ah ive said to much! D: )

 

[Broken.Promise.]

This one was done pretty well, the shading's good and the pieces fit together quite well.




This one's just cute :) done pretty darn well, if I do say so. Almost perfect.


On the Shuppet/Meditite one, the pieces don't look like they fit together well, and there's some shading issues. The Banette/Medicham one.. again, shading issues (and pink teeth :| ), but the colours go quite well together.



I prefer the Dustox recolour, the colour palette is very nice. The Cresselia one is pretty good too, just the shading issues on the yellow, like you said.



I like this one too, the colours are very nice. The Forretress's eyes are a bit creepy tho, maybe you should have made them a different colour...

Anyway, there's my criticism :)

 

[~GodricGryffindor9~]

ok some new sprites! im stuck in a monotoney of splices and color swaps.lol. i need to download some trainer sprites for pokehumans.



this one i made out of pure boredom XD. its now part of my sig.
i dont need rating on this.




srry about it having to be shunk. i use imageshack.
i really like this one. but i think i couldve done better.




well the colors fit on good but they look... ghostly.





as always i save the best for last. i think scizor looks good in blue.

well as always i await your critisizum.

 

[InMooseWeTrust]

The blue belly on Kabutops doesn't make any sense. You should use a different color.

 

[Broken.Promise.]

<-- I lol'd at this.. You could have done a lot more with it though.. possibly give Drapion Lickilicky's colour palette??

<-- pretty good from what I can see... shading appears good :)

<-- Pretty good, they do look kinda ghostly :) As InMooseWeTrust sais, the blue is quite strange, looks kinda out of place, but Omastar's blue so I can understand it. Maybe swap the colours? Underbelly being the light brown colour, and the main colour being blue??

<-- Qwilfish looks like a spikey Pokeball, I likes xD
The Scizor.. It looks good in blue, but I can see shading issues in the yellow bit. Otherwise, very good :) My favourite is still the Pachirisu/Mawile.

 

[~GodricGryffindor9~]

im a bit on edge as to what i should do...

oh and ive just got a new sprite sheet of choas. meaning im going to do some of those to.

EDIT: and hers a mini update. some examples of my choa pokemon.



from left to right: corsala, raichu, rotmom and spinda.

oh and im also doing a project were i sprite every pokemon as a choa. but it should take me at least a week.

 

[Broken.Promise.]

CUTE!!!
The corsola... hmm, the little ear things look out of place, but it's good :)
Raichu is perfect. Can't fault it :)
I like the Rotom, nice touch with the blue :P
And Spinda just = AAAW!

 

[Nina]

Hehe...Rainbow Onix.
*cough*
Well, I don't know if this a rule of sometime with animal antomy, but in my visual eye I think there should only be one large long body part besides limbs. I'm talking about Pachile. The big thing on it's head AND the tail makes it feel unbalanced and cluttered.

Have Chaos gotten more popular from when I've been gone?

 

[Pikalover10]

hahaha!! A rainbow Onix? That surprised me and oddly made me think of skittles...mmm skittles...anyway you gave me a great idea for other Pokemon to recoulor them indifferent colors(course I won't do an Onix cuz that'll be stealing and they won't be exactly like it but:D:D)

 

[~GodricGryffindor9~]

you can do a rainbow onix if you dont place the colors in that order.

oh and i have two new sprites. as soon as i find time ill make a HUGE update.




a blaziken chao.





and a ditom or roto. i dont like the density of the plasma.

 

[Growlachu98]

I love the chao. It looks great. It's hair is just wierd, The Roto has plasma that is too thick. Otherwise, it is okay.

 

[~GodricGryffindor9~]

ok well im starting a new kind a sprite. EPICMON.
these are pokemon fused so become one big giant pokemon.
so sense were allowed to do a contest once a month i guess ill just have people guess what pokemon this epicmon is made from, closest one gets a PM asking what kind of epicmon i should do next(even though some parts are pretty obvious).



well here is the clue.

parts
1.M
2.M
3.S
4.Q
5.W
6.K
7.S
8.R
9.D
10.M
11.D
12.M
13.P

Colors

1.A
2.C
3.A
4.P
5.Q

anyway the letters are the first letter of the name of each pokemon.
so.. enjoy! and please rate or critisize.


EDIT: ah! im sinking in the sea of dead threads! lol it will be dead april 8 if no one replys. oh well i might as well post another sprite of a gulpin chao: