Satoshi_Red
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A summary: A dystopian future, where masterballs have swept the wild pokemon from the earth. Not sure of rating, sorry. Probably PG-13?
/read calmly please. Starting now.
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The city was barren.
Trash lifted, briefly carried by the wind, newspapers and dust, all showing signs from days long past. Not a soul was in sight.
Good. If they realized, if they realized what she held-- But no. Best not to think it. Thoughts could be read, could be heard. By them. One's mind was not private any more-- but like whispers and shadows, some thoughts could not be easily heard or seen. Silence filled the mind, and unthinking instinct took over, as easily as it came to other poor masses that roamed the streets, unseen, unheard, unfelt.
The body ducked behind a broken wall, stepping carefully past the broken glass, and sat down, glancing about like a rat.
Small, smooth hands, bony from lack of nutrition, dirty and smelly and brown, carressed a single, smooth, transparent ball. Behind the blue sheen of the surface, small gadgetry could be seen, working like clockwork, intricate and metal. There was no symbol.
Whirring of the copter, making it's daily pass was heard, and quickly the small child-- no, small and malnourished young woman, ducked under her brown-gray coat, matching the exact color of the pebbly alley. Light shone into shadows where the unfriendly sunlight did not normally dare, but soon passed over.
She was safe. It was safe.
It was tucked underneath, into her coat, and she scurried across the ground, darting on all fours, not daring to think of herself for a moment as human, not daring to think at all, lest the psychics know she was there.
Quickly she scurried across the ground, near toward the center of the familiar, broken city. Others stared at her, briefly, but their faces meant nothing to her. Like an insect, she poked at a piece of overgrown vine crawling over a mostly-intact house, and then pulled a chunk off hurriedly, running to the shadows and stuffing it in her mouth, chewing at the unutritious thing. Then she spotted a man not far from her, squating with a piece of bread, trying to go unnoticed. Glancing down at her own food, she glared at it, before leaping at him, making a furious but silent grab for his stale loaf, desperate for something marginally edible.
The skinny woman was hardly a match normally, but this man was just as skinny and starving as her, and so they tussled, biting and knocking and yanking and clawing, until bruised and satisfied, they untangled with no hard feelings and she creeped away with half a loaf of bread in her hand, chewing happily, glancing down at her other prize.
The last pokemon, free on earth, now in her grasp. The only creature normally able to run away before a single ball was thrown, before the masterballs used by them, the humans, which she viewed with disgust and respect, but only because she did not view herself as human anymore.
Suicune. How magnificent you are.
She froze, realizing. She had thought. Such was forbidden.
Cold, sweeping death reached out for her.
Quickly stuffing it away safely, she threw herself upon the ground, shrieking for forgiveness.
"I not human! Not, not! Sorry for thinking, sorry for thinking!" She ducked her head, willing herself to project the image that she believed she was not worthy to look, to see, to know. Willing herself to know that such was so, as probing tendrils touched her mind, and she heard it approach.
She felt a flying kick be applied to her stomach, and willingly she rolled over, eyes shut, nonresistant to whatever torture they would offer her.
But as soon as it had happened, they were gone.
Her eyes opened, staring first thing straight at an old paper. It exuberantly proclaimed on the front page 'First Master Balls mass produced!' on the cover, and the picture of various members of the elite, the rich, the famous, all holding one with smiles. The paper called itself the Goldenrod Ages, but she herself did not know the actual name of the city she was in. Perhaps it was that. Perhaps it was not. Now it was nameless, like all it's inhabitants. She had been born after all the rare, and then common pokemon had been swept off the earth.
The divide between upper and lower class had increased exponentionally, as the land suddenly buckled while the lucky continued to prosper. Animals unable to compete with pokemon suddenly flourished once more, tiny creatures that had slipped by the cracks of competitive notice by taking themselves down on the bottom of the food-chain. Rats and mice, real mammalian ones, toads, and cockroaches and maggots, scum and mold. Now the world was theirs, in the few places that weren't deserts.
Nameless, for that what things with no name are named, only poorly understood all this. Her reading was terrible, despite the knowledge littered around her in letter form, in clippings and scrapheaps and broken signs.
And she only understood, really, that somehow that tiny little ball, that she found on the street by chance, that she had seen the last god of the forsaken lands disappear in, was worth more than her life, was worth more than the entire rabble of animals who looked like her and looked strangely like humans, but somehow weren't more than dust.
And the young, brown or possibly black haired young woman, with her fair dirty face and nails and eyes, could not understand in the slightest all the means for which it could be meant. In fact, running through her mind was only the thought of how she might use it to get into the place.
And if not the place, perhaps it could be bartered for good food and protection? The secrets, and even the very idea of training or using the god-beast, were lost to her, closely guarded for use by the members of the place, and utterly incomprehensible to her.
When all was quiet, she dared to approach the gates.
Men and women stared at her, daring to stick their heads out, remembering well what happened last time someone went to the gates, the gates from which them walked out if they so wished, to search for the last creatures. The last time, that someone had been brutally and utterly killed, and made such an example of that not even their dust still existed in the world.
Trembling, one hand on the little ball, she knocked against the towering, over a hundred foot tall black gate.
Silence.
She cleared her throat, not having talked except to scream for ages. "E... Ellaoh? Niooh ody here?" Her voice came out almost like a cracked whisper, in garbled english, but, as she saw moments later, rather unneededly, as almost as soon as she finished talking, the doors slowly swung open, blinding light coming out from them. She trembled horribly as two darkly and well dressed figures stepped out, real live humans, standing straight and daring, she assumed, to think. A strange black stick-like device was carried by each of them, with a pointed end that could probably skewer her if they so desired.
Not a word was uttered as they turned simultaneously to face her, and one bent their stick down to poke her in the tummy, a silent demand.
Quickly, she showed them a small section of the ball, holding it protectively in her hands low against her dirty coat. Their eyes widened, and suddenly, one smiled.
"Very well, Miss..."
"Ain't gotta na 'ame." She spoke, making one almost wince at her poor grasp of language.
"Miss Joan, then." The door opened wide, and the blinding white almost swallowed her. They gently but demandingly pushed her forward, in, inward--
"Welcome to Utopia." Their voices stated, as she disappeared into the void of white.
--/ want to see more?
/read calmly please. Starting now.
- - -
The city was barren.
Trash lifted, briefly carried by the wind, newspapers and dust, all showing signs from days long past. Not a soul was in sight.
Good. If they realized, if they realized what she held-- But no. Best not to think it. Thoughts could be read, could be heard. By them. One's mind was not private any more-- but like whispers and shadows, some thoughts could not be easily heard or seen. Silence filled the mind, and unthinking instinct took over, as easily as it came to other poor masses that roamed the streets, unseen, unheard, unfelt.
The body ducked behind a broken wall, stepping carefully past the broken glass, and sat down, glancing about like a rat.
Small, smooth hands, bony from lack of nutrition, dirty and smelly and brown, carressed a single, smooth, transparent ball. Behind the blue sheen of the surface, small gadgetry could be seen, working like clockwork, intricate and metal. There was no symbol.
Whirring of the copter, making it's daily pass was heard, and quickly the small child-- no, small and malnourished young woman, ducked under her brown-gray coat, matching the exact color of the pebbly alley. Light shone into shadows where the unfriendly sunlight did not normally dare, but soon passed over.
She was safe. It was safe.
It was tucked underneath, into her coat, and she scurried across the ground, darting on all fours, not daring to think of herself for a moment as human, not daring to think at all, lest the psychics know she was there.
Quickly she scurried across the ground, near toward the center of the familiar, broken city. Others stared at her, briefly, but their faces meant nothing to her. Like an insect, she poked at a piece of overgrown vine crawling over a mostly-intact house, and then pulled a chunk off hurriedly, running to the shadows and stuffing it in her mouth, chewing at the unutritious thing. Then she spotted a man not far from her, squating with a piece of bread, trying to go unnoticed. Glancing down at her own food, she glared at it, before leaping at him, making a furious but silent grab for his stale loaf, desperate for something marginally edible.
The skinny woman was hardly a match normally, but this man was just as skinny and starving as her, and so they tussled, biting and knocking and yanking and clawing, until bruised and satisfied, they untangled with no hard feelings and she creeped away with half a loaf of bread in her hand, chewing happily, glancing down at her other prize.
The last pokemon, free on earth, now in her grasp. The only creature normally able to run away before a single ball was thrown, before the masterballs used by them, the humans, which she viewed with disgust and respect, but only because she did not view herself as human anymore.
Suicune. How magnificent you are.
She froze, realizing. She had thought. Such was forbidden.
Cold, sweeping death reached out for her.
Quickly stuffing it away safely, she threw herself upon the ground, shrieking for forgiveness.
"I not human! Not, not! Sorry for thinking, sorry for thinking!" She ducked her head, willing herself to project the image that she believed she was not worthy to look, to see, to know. Willing herself to know that such was so, as probing tendrils touched her mind, and she heard it approach.
She felt a flying kick be applied to her stomach, and willingly she rolled over, eyes shut, nonresistant to whatever torture they would offer her.
But as soon as it had happened, they were gone.
Her eyes opened, staring first thing straight at an old paper. It exuberantly proclaimed on the front page 'First Master Balls mass produced!' on the cover, and the picture of various members of the elite, the rich, the famous, all holding one with smiles. The paper called itself the Goldenrod Ages, but she herself did not know the actual name of the city she was in. Perhaps it was that. Perhaps it was not. Now it was nameless, like all it's inhabitants. She had been born after all the rare, and then common pokemon had been swept off the earth.
The divide between upper and lower class had increased exponentionally, as the land suddenly buckled while the lucky continued to prosper. Animals unable to compete with pokemon suddenly flourished once more, tiny creatures that had slipped by the cracks of competitive notice by taking themselves down on the bottom of the food-chain. Rats and mice, real mammalian ones, toads, and cockroaches and maggots, scum and mold. Now the world was theirs, in the few places that weren't deserts.
Nameless, for that what things with no name are named, only poorly understood all this. Her reading was terrible, despite the knowledge littered around her in letter form, in clippings and scrapheaps and broken signs.
And she only understood, really, that somehow that tiny little ball, that she found on the street by chance, that she had seen the last god of the forsaken lands disappear in, was worth more than her life, was worth more than the entire rabble of animals who looked like her and looked strangely like humans, but somehow weren't more than dust.
And the young, brown or possibly black haired young woman, with her fair dirty face and nails and eyes, could not understand in the slightest all the means for which it could be meant. In fact, running through her mind was only the thought of how she might use it to get into the place.
And if not the place, perhaps it could be bartered for good food and protection? The secrets, and even the very idea of training or using the god-beast, were lost to her, closely guarded for use by the members of the place, and utterly incomprehensible to her.
When all was quiet, she dared to approach the gates.
Men and women stared at her, daring to stick their heads out, remembering well what happened last time someone went to the gates, the gates from which them walked out if they so wished, to search for the last creatures. The last time, that someone had been brutally and utterly killed, and made such an example of that not even their dust still existed in the world.
Trembling, one hand on the little ball, she knocked against the towering, over a hundred foot tall black gate.
Silence.
She cleared her throat, not having talked except to scream for ages. "E... Ellaoh? Niooh ody here?" Her voice came out almost like a cracked whisper, in garbled english, but, as she saw moments later, rather unneededly, as almost as soon as she finished talking, the doors slowly swung open, blinding light coming out from them. She trembled horribly as two darkly and well dressed figures stepped out, real live humans, standing straight and daring, she assumed, to think. A strange black stick-like device was carried by each of them, with a pointed end that could probably skewer her if they so desired.
Not a word was uttered as they turned simultaneously to face her, and one bent their stick down to poke her in the tummy, a silent demand.
Quickly, she showed them a small section of the ball, holding it protectively in her hands low against her dirty coat. Their eyes widened, and suddenly, one smiled.
"Very well, Miss..."
"Ain't gotta na 'ame." She spoke, making one almost wince at her poor grasp of language.
"Miss Joan, then." The door opened wide, and the blinding white almost swallowed her. They gently but demandingly pushed her forward, in, inward--
"Welcome to Utopia." Their voices stated, as she disappeared into the void of white.
--/ want to see more?
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