Ah, I remember The Rocket Case. The style of it all was actually quite captivating, though I never got to finish it because... well, I have no idea. I might get back to it at some strange undefined point in the future, but for now I'm still trying to finish The Thinking Man's Guide, which I really should have finished ages ago, except real life caught up with me. I've been slowly making my way through it when time permits. I hate having having to read off a screen, but there you go.
Also, just a fun fact, but one of my earliest pieces of fanfiction, on this site anyway, was a Groudon-human hybrid story. I just thought that was funnily relevant. Looking it up, the style of it all seems awfully terrible in retrospect, and I never finished it. Again, that's a project I've been holding off.
And thanks for the critique. It's nice to know that it's not all monotony, I think.