Although I referenced a few points in your thread in the Pokemon FanFiction forum that broke the section's rules, There was one I must post here instead of in there. It is against the Community and PFF rules to double post unless you are posting two subsequent chapters or a chapter after a reply to a comment. If you want to address multiple people at once, you need to include it all in one post. If you forgot to add something in your post, then you are supposed to edit your post instead of posting again. Just a heads up for next time.