The Crystal Legacy

Kuri-Chan ♪

Crystal Trainer
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    • Seen Apr 28, 2008
    Ok. So, this is my first sprite comic, please dont be too hard on me.
    Comments are wanted, and are better than cookies. (I like cookies *shifts eyes*)

    Story:
    Crystal is a Young girl from Kanto, and sets out on a journey after being given a Pokemon with a strange marking on its forehead. The unnamed Professor gave her and Teo, her childhood rival, a Flareon for Crystal and a Jolteon for Teo. Crystal met Li, a strange boy about her age, when his Mew was stolen. Little do they know, destiny has more than what they bargined for in store for them...
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    INTRO:
    Intro Part 1
    Intro Part 2

    Chapter 1: Mew
    Episode One- The Boy and His Mew
    Episode Two- Rescue Mew!
    Episode Three-The Crystal Pokemon
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    Cast:

    -Sprite not ready-
    Name: Crystal
    Gender: Female
    Age: 11
    Pokemon: Flareon
    Text: Silver-Greyish
    Info: Crystal is an 11 year old girl from Pallet. She is the main charactor. She is kind and loving, but not very brave any worrys alot.

    -Sprite not Ready-
    Name: Teo
    Gender: Male
    Age: 12
    Pokemon: Jolteon
    Text: Dark Purple-ish
    Info: Teo is Crystals Childhood rival, after he pushed her into the lake when she was 5. They've been compeating ever scince.

    -Sprite not ready-
    Name: Li
    Gender: Male
    Age: 11
    Pokemon: Mew
    Text: Gold-ish
    Info: Li meets Crystal after his mew is Stolen. He is a strange boy but He knows that Crystal is more than what she seems...
     
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    It's a good start.I like how you made Li have Mew
     
    Its good for a generic comic its nicely set out but it still is a generic comic.
     
    Generic? Well, Crystal's not collecting badges.
    In season 3 there *should* be a magor plaot twist I'm thinking up.
     
    all i have to say is, theres many comics with mew in it
     
    Nice...Very nice for a first comic! 7/10 :D (cause i never give 10 :p )
    Keep up the good work!

    Dinini
     
    I'm hopeing to get the next one up by Monday. I've been busy...
     
    awww....mew ish so kawaii!
    keep up the good work! 8/10
     
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