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[tokyodrift]

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The PokeCommunity Presents:

Get-Together 2019

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What is the Get Together?
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Event Suggestion Signup
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[tokyodrift]

please leave your thoughts!

 

[bobandbill]

Looks great! Very cute. I think that kinda suggests a two-team thing also with the image - team pikachu and team eevee...

Just noting the inconsistency in headings: one is Get-Together, and another Get Together (no hyphen).

 

[Hyzenthlay]

I love this, great work! The image is perfect!

Perhaps give a wider space between the headers and the rest of the text—just one space down will do, I think!

As for the headers themselves, may I suggest increasing the black and reducing the white outline a tiny bit? Maybe give the title more presence over them?

 

[Janp]

As I said on Discord, it's awesome. And as for the text, I wanted to make as many detective puns as I could in the first part and took the rest from the last year's thread, so please leave your thoughts on it:

The PokéCommunity Presents: Get-Together 2019
You don't have to be Sherlock Holmes to figure out that it's once again time for another cup of Get-Together. So dust off your old coat, find your pipe, polish your mustache and let's dive into this mysterious event. But if you have no clue about what is the Get-Together or how can you participate, read on! You'll need every drop of information you can gather.

What is the Get-Together?
The Get-Together is a yearly event in which members from all over the community gather to participate in various events! We usually come up with a theme, but it's all generally the same concept of the community "getting together" to participate in events and having fun!

Event Suggestion Signup
That all said, we're now opening sign-ups currently for Event Organizers, and Event Suggestions! Feel free to reply to this thread indicating your interest and what type of event you'd like to run. You're welcome to organise co-hosting events if more than one of you want to run the same event. We'll get back to you all as quick as we can to let you know if your event will be running.

EDIT: Adjustments included up to bobandbill's post

 

[bobandbill]

Firstly - same comment about consistency in using the hyphen for GT applies.

But if you have no clue about what is Get-Together

what is the Get-Together

 

[Janp]

Firstly - same comment about consistency in using the hyphen for GT applies.

I knew I shouldn't copy it from the main post.

Also one more idea: I've used Sherlock Holmes in the post as one of the most famous detectives. If we would want to keep it in Pokémon universe, who could be placed there? Looker? Tim Goodman? Detective Pikachu? Someone else?

 

[bobandbill]

I feel Sherlock Holmes is fine for the GT info post there, personally. No need to be 100% in-universe.