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Metagross's secret
PG-13 (Due to some violence and language)
Chapter one- Duke and Metagross
Duke was sitting there in the pokemon center waiting for his pokemon to be healed. He only had one, and it was his trusty metagross. Everyone had always been trying to tell him to get more pokemon, even if it was just more metagross', and he would never beat the elite four with his one pokemon. But whenever he took out a pokeball to catch a new pokemon, metagross would just stare at him, and he would put the pokeball back. Duke was a 5'7 22 year old boy who weighed about 170, most of it being muscle. At the moment he was wearing swim trunks and a tee-shirt.
"Alright, your pokemon have been fully healed!" Said nurse joy with a smile.
Duke took the pokemon and left the center. He stepped outside into the quiet little town of paciflog. He frowned upon it due to its lack of gym, pokemart and basiclly human exsitence. There were only about 20 houses. Some with small familes of four, but most of elderly men who just sit on the porch and gaze at the endless sea. Whenever he looked around he saw those old folks either sitting or talking amoungest eachother. He wanted to quickly get out of there so he could get back to lilycove. He went back to the pier where his fathers boat sat. It was small and fit about 10 people. But at the moment it was only him and his best friend (who was driving) Dylan. He had known dylan since he was four years old, but he knew little about him. The only reasons they were friends was because they were both outcasts in their schools. Duke was an outcast due to him only having one pokemon. Most kids would make fun of him but he would battle them and easily win. Dylan was an outcast because of his weight. Until he was 15 he was very overweight. At 14 he weighed nearly 160 pounds! Then he started working out and he still weighed 160 pounds but it was mostly muscle. Dylan would sometimes tell duke to get more pokemon but duke just stared at him. Dylan had a wide variety of pokemon, and sometimes he even offered Duke one of his pokemon, but Duke just said no.
"Hey, take ya long enough to get your pokemon healed?" said Dylan.
"Shutup, i had some other things to take care of, come lets get out of here, this place freaks me out, theres nothing going on here."
"Whatever you say, boss," said Dylan sarcasticly.
Duke let out his metagross for some air. Duke left metagross to do what he had to do. Duke took off his shirt so he could get a tan. He dozed off for a while but woke up to the feeling of rain drops of his chest. It really hurt him and when he looked at himself he was sunburnt. He put his shirt back on and walked up to dylon.
"Hey *******, you didn't wake me up to tell me i was getting burnt?" said Duke.
"Oh, you were burnt? said Dylan with a devilish grin on his face. Next time remember to put on sunblock"
"Hey, where did metagross go?"
"Oh, he went downstairs, he was getting rusty from the rain" said dylon.
Duke went downstairs and saw metagross on the floor sleeping. Duke sent his metagross back to his pokeball and sat down and rested. Five minutes later dylon was yelling down that they were in lilycove. Duke was determined to try and catch a second pokemon, if his metagross would let him...
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okay what did you think for chapter one? I know it wasn't so interesting but it will get much better in the later chapters. Post and tell me what you think, give some advice and some even criticize.
PG-13 (Due to some violence and language)
Chapter one- Duke and Metagross
Duke was sitting there in the pokemon center waiting for his pokemon to be healed. He only had one, and it was his trusty metagross. Everyone had always been trying to tell him to get more pokemon, even if it was just more metagross', and he would never beat the elite four with his one pokemon. But whenever he took out a pokeball to catch a new pokemon, metagross would just stare at him, and he would put the pokeball back. Duke was a 5'7 22 year old boy who weighed about 170, most of it being muscle. At the moment he was wearing swim trunks and a tee-shirt.
"Alright, your pokemon have been fully healed!" Said nurse joy with a smile.
Duke took the pokemon and left the center. He stepped outside into the quiet little town of paciflog. He frowned upon it due to its lack of gym, pokemart and basiclly human exsitence. There were only about 20 houses. Some with small familes of four, but most of elderly men who just sit on the porch and gaze at the endless sea. Whenever he looked around he saw those old folks either sitting or talking amoungest eachother. He wanted to quickly get out of there so he could get back to lilycove. He went back to the pier where his fathers boat sat. It was small and fit about 10 people. But at the moment it was only him and his best friend (who was driving) Dylan. He had known dylan since he was four years old, but he knew little about him. The only reasons they were friends was because they were both outcasts in their schools. Duke was an outcast due to him only having one pokemon. Most kids would make fun of him but he would battle them and easily win. Dylan was an outcast because of his weight. Until he was 15 he was very overweight. At 14 he weighed nearly 160 pounds! Then he started working out and he still weighed 160 pounds but it was mostly muscle. Dylan would sometimes tell duke to get more pokemon but duke just stared at him. Dylan had a wide variety of pokemon, and sometimes he even offered Duke one of his pokemon, but Duke just said no.
"Hey, take ya long enough to get your pokemon healed?" said Dylan.
"Shutup, i had some other things to take care of, come lets get out of here, this place freaks me out, theres nothing going on here."
"Whatever you say, boss," said Dylan sarcasticly.
Duke let out his metagross for some air. Duke left metagross to do what he had to do. Duke took off his shirt so he could get a tan. He dozed off for a while but woke up to the feeling of rain drops of his chest. It really hurt him and when he looked at himself he was sunburnt. He put his shirt back on and walked up to dylon.
"Hey *******, you didn't wake me up to tell me i was getting burnt?" said Duke.
"Oh, you were burnt? said Dylan with a devilish grin on his face. Next time remember to put on sunblock"
"Hey, where did metagross go?"
"Oh, he went downstairs, he was getting rusty from the rain" said dylon.
Duke went downstairs and saw metagross on the floor sleeping. Duke sent his metagross back to his pokeball and sat down and rested. Five minutes later dylon was yelling down that they were in lilycove. Duke was determined to try and catch a second pokemon, if his metagross would let him...
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okay what did you think for chapter one? I know it wasn't so interesting but it will get much better in the later chapters. Post and tell me what you think, give some advice and some even criticize.
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